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A very good concept. Although it might have more impact if there was only one paper saying stop the wars. Right now the second one on the ground out of focus is a bit disturbing. If it was only a white sheet it would make a lot of difference in my opinion. Also having the upper part of the main sheet of paper entirely on the photo would increase it's impact. Right now the S from stop is a little bit cut out. This photo definitly has a lot of potential.
A very good concept. Although it might have more impact if there was only one paper saying stop the wars. Right now the second one on the ground out of focus is a bit disturbing. If it was only a white sheet it would make a lot of difference in my opinion. Also having the upper part of the main sheet of paper entirely on the photo would increase it's impact. Right now the S from stop is a little bit cut out. This photo definitly has a lot of potential.
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thanks for that ..
and i should hv mistakes in my works because i am begginer photographer and i dont hv a good camera
thanks again
thats good for me ...
and im realy happy to see ur opinion here